| 2006-04-14 07:55:51 |
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First off I would like to state that this is entirely fictional, thus you should shut the fuck up. It was the best story i've read on this damned site, good job. |
| 2006-04-15 23:53:12 |
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rudystahrman- your just jealous 'cuz your stories suck!
Great story. Nicely paced. Real well-done, I haven't got any real complaints. |
| 2006-04-17 11:54:52 |
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the setup took too long
other than that it wasnt written bad |
| 2006-04-18 00:04:42 |
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Look for Part 2 to be posted within 4 or 5 days....I think you'll enjoy it better than the first part! |
| 2006-04-21 13:03:44 |
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5'8 190 pounds, shes kinda fat, did nobody catch that? |