| 2007-10-30 19:16:59 |
little jessica
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I really hope this was suppose to be a parody of some of the shitty sex stories out there because if it was then great job, you captured every stupid mistake perfectly, from spelling, to being completely unrealistic and having a horrible plot line that makes little to no sense. So if your point was to satire and poke fun at a lot of the other stories, well done. On the other hand, if this was a serious attempt... well I'll just say please get out of junior high before writing again, and do the world a favor, don't ever have sex or reproduce. |