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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-04-06 04:52:34 | the wet dream_(1) | To the comment writer "hot nympho": you may be a hot piece of ass, honey, but why are you so proud to admit that you're dumber than dog droppings? Being stupid is nothing to be proud of. As a wise man once said, "it is better to be silent and be thought a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt." |
| 2006-04-06 07:33:39 | the wet dream_(1) | to all who have commented, good or bad, thanks. Sorry for the grammer and paragraphing. I am not having good success with the program that XNXX offers us writers. The traditional indent and block paragraphs do not seem to work, then again it may be me. |
| 2006-04-07 16:09:31 | The Unknown Commuter: | keep dreaming ...............what an asshole his cock is problably less than 2 inches |
| 2006-04-06 04:37:02 | Just a Taste at Work | "Her labial shutters of ecstacy"? "The rosette asterisk of her nether channel"? Damn, Sailor, you're a flowery-talking fellow, aren't you. but It was kind of fun to read this hugely over-descriptive tale. 7/10 |
| 2006-04-06 09:30:52 | Just a Taste at Work | too much extra dialog in the story. re-do it and take out some of the double talk. give this version a 4 |