| 2006-04-07 00:42:32 |
Jimmy, The boy Next Door
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I was thinking the same thing too. But otherwise, it's still pretty good. |
| 2006-04-07 12:21:13 |
Jimmy, The boy Next Door
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GOOD STORY BUT NOT A LESBIAN SCENE ANYWHERE,DAMM.SPRUCE UP PART 2 AND YOU'LL HAVE A WINNER. |
| 2006-04-08 15:02:16 |
Jimmy, The boy Next Door
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Great story! You have a good command of painting the visual through your words! Keep writing, please! |
| 2006-04-08 17:16:08 |
Jimmy, The boy Next Door
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Very nicely written. All the dialiogue was totally believable. I agree with wickedsin - good command of language. Cheers. |
| 2006-04-10 05:53:11 |
Jimmy, The boy Next Door
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it was ok......but i culdnt get a boner |