| 2008-02-02 01:25:19 |
Zoo Trip
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The story wasn't bad, but seriuosly needs to be formatted and made in a way that can be read and understood |
| 2006-04-06 04:58:20 |
My new best friend
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Oy, vey! Keep licking your dildo, Honey, but let someone else do the writing. 5/10 |
| 2006-04-06 21:58:19 |
My new best friend
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Third person or First person...pick one. |
| 2006-04-07 00:50:30 |
My new best friend
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i agree with them pick a writing style and stick to it other than that it was good |
| 2006-04-24 05:34:07 |
My new best friend
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when will we see a part 2. this was real good |