| 2006-04-12 01:31:34 |
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The premise of the story is fucking incrdible. Work on the arrangment a bit, just to make it easier for the reader and you will right on the mark...either way, it worked...I read, I Beat, I Came |
| 2006-04-12 06:00:43 |
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Just work on the arangement and you will be golden. I had a lot of fun with this story ^_^ |
| 2006-04-12 09:09:46 |
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GREAT STORY, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT HOLIDAY BREAK |
| 2006-04-12 23:04:18 |
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu... suc |
| 2006-04-13 11:27:41 |
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It was great!! I wish I was your brother :) we be fucking all nite!!! Keep on writing |