| 2006-04-13 17:23:05 |
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Great story! spelling needs a little work, but over, i say 9. |
| 2006-04-14 22:45:30 |
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No offense but female writers usually are lacking, but damn...this was good. part two would be much appreicated 9/10 |
| 2006-04-17 00:28:22 |
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...Ever heard of a Grammer/Spell check? The typos are so bad I could barely enjoy the story, as good as it was. |
| 2006-04-17 01:24:38 |
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god i love it when people diss on someones story (a nice one at that) and they always make mention of spelling and grammatical errors...yet usually they misspell simple words along the way...hypocritical much? but they do, unfortunate as it may seem, have a point. the quotations are set very haphazardly and the general spelling is attrocious. but an excellent story line. and another week to pull it off. i had to read this story ... seeing as im on spring break in florida right now :-P. But I am with cousins not my bro / sis. oh well...partying every night is rocking!!! do me a favor and write a pt 2 before i have to go back to college... |
| 2006-04-17 01:37:07 |
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amazing story madam. fuck all the haters, they don't even try. |