| 2006-04-13 22:50:36 |
Young Erin
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God damn the twist at the end is ... AHHH!! I love it. 10/10 |
| 2006-04-14 00:04:49 |
Young Erin
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God damn that was great!!! 20/10 |
| 2006-04-14 01:19:11 |
Young Erin
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Need to build on tjis and get a little more graphic. Tell us what you did, how it felt and what she said. |
| 2006-04-14 01:24:27 |
Young Erin
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My #1 Story Has Always Been Captured Family, But This Story is not only better its 1000/10!!! Great Story Continue Chp 2!!! |
| 2006-04-14 02:55:50 |
Young Erin
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loved it, came twice. super twist at the end! loved it 10/10 |