| 2006-04-15 00:08:24 |
Young Erin
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good story but dont do an incest story next man that shit is gross. |
| 2006-04-15 00:37:37 |
Young Erin
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Wow, that was amazing. I love the twist at the end. Completely amazing. 100/100. Good grammar and wonderful punctuation. |
| 2006-04-15 00:58:34 |
Young Erin
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it wasnt a rape really. just pretend. great twist. keep writing. 10/10 |
| 2006-04-15 02:26:52 |
Young Erin
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Fucking awesome twist man totally fucking awesome good job keep writing 10/10 |
| 2006-04-15 05:03:28 |
Young Erin
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holy fuck man, amazing. 10/10 |