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Date Story title Comment
2006-04-11 16:29:48 Virgin Bedroom u suk!!!! wtf that sucked
2006-04-11 19:56:31 Virgin Bedroom Don't let people downgrade your work. it is definely better written than most. It a story that would hard pressed to be unreal with todays socity, thoat our youth are growing up in. Its a pleasure to real a real story, that one find factural writings.
2006-04-12 01:22:57 Virgin Bedroom I agree it was real but no real action but realistic though, good work.
2006-04-12 05:42:07 Virgin Bedroom Wow, you wrote an entire story without managing to metion that you were a football player with 6% body fat. I see you have bought a random adjective generator. Dud, I am sorry but it is like you write stories but you never read anything you write. It is just bad. As you can see by the rapid descent down the ratings, I am not alone in my opinion.
2006-04-13 17:26:52 Virgin Bedroom wat was the point of that, it was kind of okay, but then it cuts off, and the whole detail of the sister and where the parents have gone and the ex boyfriend why?

we want action, not an anti-climax
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