| 2006-04-16 00:04:14 |
Virgin Bedroom
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I liked the story but it is a little short .I give you a 9/10. |
| 2006-06-01 19:21:36 |
Virgin Bedroom
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your writing is getting better. keep trying. and ignore people who tell you to stop. read my stories. Your writing style is similar to mine when I started (like a billion years ago). write a fantasy. |
| 2006-06-26 02:44:04 |
Virgin Bedroom
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ok u said that this story is true but are the other ones that u wrote acctully true to because in like all ur storys ur 17 |
| 2006-07-27 16:21:43 |
Virgin Bedroom
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Short but sweet thats how stories should be |
| 2006-07-28 00:56:28 |
Virgin Bedroom
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needs details |