| 2006-04-15 08:09:00 |
Laura and me, part 1
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now this is a good les story keep going an 9/10 |
| 2006-04-17 21:23:00 |
Laura and me, part 1
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Very good erotic and detailed story. Would like to rad more about you. |
| 2006-04-17 22:03:23 |
Laura and me, part 1
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It wasnt bad a bit of toomch child porno... she coulod have been a little older or something, but otherwise a well written story. |
| 2006-04-17 23:06:40 |
Laura and me, part 1
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i think the girl was a bit young and your story didnt really have much structure it got to the punch to fast |
| 2006-04-18 01:24:33 |
Laura and me, part 1
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Definately need to write more parts to this |