2006-09-12 22:56:52 |
My Sister the Cheerleader Chapter 2
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9/10 BUT... Slow down. Everything happens too fast. Give us more time to relish the moment. Every human that ever had a dick is envious. But to make it believable, you need a bit more detail. At 17 years old, you may think that 10 minutes of poking will keep a gal happy, but 6 of them is gonna take a weekend. Your style and story line all hang together well. Keep it up. |
2006-12-18 23:16:06 |
My Sister the Cheerleader Chapter 2
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THAT SUCKED I LIKE BEING FUCKED IN THE ASS IM A GUY AND NEED SOME BIG HARD WHITE DICK UP IN MY DRUM HOLE E-MAIL ME AT WISHEYWOO4 |
2007-01-07 15:52:13 |
My Sister the Cheerleader Chapter 2
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I concluded the story was rather satisfactory a dab short though 6/10 |
2007-09-05 22:12:59 |
My Sister the Cheerleader Chapter 2
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gj but make it longer next time |
2007-11-08 19:52:02 |
My Sister the Cheerleader Chapter 2
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good story...and why is a fag reading this shit anyway? go watch a gay porn wanker |