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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-06-30 20:45:34 | Michelle_(6) | Good warm stroy, needs more description, esp for first time sex. u gotta 6. r |
| 2006-07-01 12:48:24 | Michelle_(6) | now you told the world * very sexy story also well written |
| 2006-07-01 16:43:13 | Michelle_(6) | fuck off |
| 2006-07-02 00:44:11 | Michelle_(6) | Very good start. I have read many stories and would have to say you have a very good base. Could you revise your story to include more details and then repost it? I bet you would get more positive feedback. 8/10 |
| 2006-07-03 00:25:05 | Michelle_(6) | Good for a first, the next one you're doing is better though, you're already improving. Needs more detail and visual description. quand..le seigneur me prend |