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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-08 23:24:18 | Cruel intentions Pt 1 | very hot keep writin and ill keep cummin |
| 2006-07-09 05:02:11 | Cruel intentions Pt 1 | made me wet just reading it 10/10 write more |
| 2006-07-09 19:36:06 | Cruel intentions Pt 1 | Man it's very ordinary, I usually like this stuff and trust me i read this alot but, it is just too ordinary i found the story line very boring... 4/10 |
| 2006-07-09 22:41:08 | Cruel intentions Pt 1 | hoar huh? It's actually spelled whore... but oh well... also, you have some problems with quotations, which makes the story hard to follow, transitioning from character to dialogue. Good story line, keep up the imagination part and work on the mechanics a little |
| 2006-07-11 21:33:42 | Cruel intentions Pt 1 | Pt 2 has been submitted i hope i can improve it and keep my stories intresting, thank you everyone who posted comments i take any advise you can give. |