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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-09-29 04:41:10 | Tisdale High | thats lame he should have force fucked her shes a bitch |
2007-12-18 22:20:43 | Tisdale High | that was great if a mentally retarded person wrote it |
2008-02-03 14:56:15 | Tisdale High | yeah i agree with u there! the only lesbian in thsi story was when he looked in and saw tht lesbian orgy thingy! lame shit, cant call this a lesbian story when its about a freaken guy! :@ |
2008-04-10 22:19:45 | Tisdale High | It was great 10/10 but it should really be longer.......cant wait till the 2nd part^_^ |
2006-07-10 12:35:32 | My son the stud | Dear Q, nice story and welcome to writing! May i make a suggestion? be more patient, write with more detail. include some of your nasty thoughts and be more descriptive. Maybe leave out the third party until we get to know the Mom and Boy a little better. But great work and good luck on further writing. |