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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-10 22:08:33 | ...and every girl in the family, chapter 2 | i wonder if those two realize its FICTION... good story |
| 2006-08-13 20:08:52 | ...and every girl in the family, chapter 2 | ii agree with the first 2.....you suck at spelling...and you are a moron......no0bs all of you |
| 2006-08-15 13:38:05 | ...and every girl in the family, chapter 2 | DUMBASS CRITICS LEARN HOW TO SPELL GOOD STORY KEEP WRITING |
| 2006-09-06 10:43:42 | ...and every girl in the family, chapter 2 | Overall, a nice story, and I'd love to hear more, but it's a bit off some places. You need to stretch out the sex scenes, get LOADS of details, I mean, come on, it's the sex we're here for, why rush through it then? ;) And I did think it was rather convenient that Pearl was so willing, even though Angela had talked to her.. At least a little wondering from the main character would've been nice :) And one last thing, make sure to read the story through, 'cause there are quite a few gramma and spelling errors. I know it's a small thing, but it does take some of the pleasure, when you have to read the same section more than once to fully understand it. So; listen to your critics (except the ones who keep calling you a moron) and keep up the good work :) Details is your best friend ;P |
| 2006-09-09 02:27:00 | ...and every girl in the family, chapter 2 | this stories are bad |