| 2006-07-11 12:36:40 |
My Sister Eve
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Excellent stuff - lots more please! |
| 2006-07-11 13:27:27 |
My Sister Eve
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how about ch 2 very sexy an well written |
| 2006-07-11 14:26:51 |
My Sister Eve
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I give this a 10/10 Outstanding! Where's the next chapter?? |
| 2006-07-11 14:30:31 |
My Sister Eve
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great story but i've definitely read it before somewhere. maybe even on here. could you tell me the other site you've posted this on cuz otherwise i have the suspision that you're trying to con us. |
| 2006-07-11 15:23:11 |
My Sister Eve
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dan is right for some part. part one is an adaptation of a pre-existing story. all the other parts are my own work and i have also padded this one out quite a bit as well. part 2 has been submitted and should appear in about 4 days time |