| 2007-09-21 00:05:16 |
Speeding Ticket
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try to stay in third person |
| 2008-01-22 02:49:40 |
Speeding Ticket
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Oh man! I can't wait to read what happens next! You're really good at this. |
| 2006-07-11 11:19:12 |
my secretary_(1)
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sound like you are just descibing a scene from a porno movie....try something original, will ya???? |
| 2006-07-11 12:07:25 |
my secretary_(1)
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sorry but i don't see u writing any stories, just negative comments. if u don't like it, fine, find something you do like but other than that - fuck off! |
| 2006-07-11 13:34:54 |
my secretary_(1)
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I think it's nice. Have fun writting |