| 2006-07-13 03:16:41 |
End of the world - Chapter 6
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absolutly love your storie, just finished up this chapter now. I only have 1 huge problem with your stoty, in the opening chapters you made charron look like a big character for the future, yet you haven't included barely anything with her, absolutly no sex OR conversations with her since wither chapter 1 or 2. I beg you to give more informqation about sharon, make her the focus of the next chapter maybe? Please bring ehr back, i was hoping that her and dan were going to become serious lovers, like he would focus more on her than anyone else, like a wife. Please bring her back!!! But yet again my friend, great great story, 10/10 again definatly! Hope you release chapter 7 soon though, not trying to rush you so it will be bad, just hoping for a release in the next month? BRING BACK SHARON!! |