| 2006-07-12 09:53:05 |
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Its tough isn't it. Staying with a series and keeping it interesting without resorting to repetition; the right combination of sex, conflict, and plot. . .chapter after chapter, it ain't easy. I have not commented so far but I though I would throw in a little encouragment to hang in there. Oh yeah, and let us know before you change point of view, it got a little confusing, expecially since you did not do it in the other stories. Keep writing man, we're all pulling for you. |
| 2006-07-12 09:57:47 |
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u could do better. how many chapters r left? |
| 2006-07-12 10:21:40 |
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_o_ you are a story writing god. im also here with encouragement. Keep up the great work. i know its hard but hey we love them. im kinda wondering if it will get to the point when its just the kids but like i said keep up the hard work. |
| 2006-07-12 11:29:57 |
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All I can say is that this is the best series i have ever read. |
| 2006-07-12 13:02:47 |
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Good Job!!! keep up the great stories the change in the point of view really put a nice chance into this chapter. |