| 2006-07-13 15:13:50 |
a cheap fuck!!!
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learn to put paregraphs in your story. might be more readable. as is it is very hard to follow and lose interest. gave it a 2 |
| 2006-07-19 07:44:53 |
Mels pussey
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This has to be one of the best written stories on this site... Extremely well done 10/10 from me |
| 2006-07-19 15:53:37 |
Mels pussey
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It looks like Mel turned out to be a real cocksucker!!!!! |
| 2006-07-19 22:17:26 |
Mels pussey
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Like the story, but the misplaced "s made it hard to follow. |
| 2006-07-20 08:17:14 |
Mels pussey
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hey man ... nice sror but really really bad grammar n damn man ur bad at spellings which just put the whole mood off... |