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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-20 09:39:26 | Mels pussey | i dodn't know about the best written but it was very good -sexy an a very good preice of soducetion |
| 2006-07-20 09:59:56 | Mels pussey | how about ch 2 |
| 2006-07-20 18:09:50 | Mels pussey | First, learn to spell, it is a hot story, but bad spelling distracts from the rythym. u gottta 9 for content. r |
| 2006-07-20 22:00:20 | Mels pussey | learn how to spell, and learn how to write an actual complete sentence. and how to use quotes to show people talking. and how to transition from one thought to another. the concept is great, but the actual story is horrible. kind of like the scarlet letter, actually...excellent overall story, but painful to read. |
| 2006-07-21 11:49:16 | Mels pussey | who the fuck cares about the grammer or spelling? It is onw awesome story, I hope there is a #2 |