| 2006-07-16 17:44:21 |
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Can't wait for Chapter two. I'm going to it right now! |
| 2006-07-17 13:06:14 |
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if uw ere a little more specific about the girl's physical features, it would be even more awesome than the story already is |
| 2006-08-10 08:24:59 |
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Very hoy story. what a wonderful thing learning is. --- 9/10 |
| 2006-08-12 18:35:44 |
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i have read hornyer cearel boxes |
| 2006-12-06 12:13:57 |
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well done. a second part would be awesome. the only thing i have to say is add more detail to the sex stuff, you did great, but more couldn't hurt. 8/10 |