| 2006-07-16 13:41:12 |
showering with Rose
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please continue |
| 2006-07-16 14:47:37 |
showering with Rose
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Continue, but for petes sake break out your paragraphs, and learn how to write dialogue, this was like reading heiroglyphics. |
| 2006-07-16 14:50:19 |
showering with Rose
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pussy is creaming , need more |
| 2006-07-16 17:49:25 |
showering with Rose
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Please continue, my pussy is aching for more. But you need to check your grammar it was difficult to read. |
| 2006-07-16 17:52:59 |
showering with Rose
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very good for a first story. you might want to re-read your highschool english book , though. |