| 2006-07-17 14:59:54 |
the day i was with my best friend ashley
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That was the hardest story to read because there was little punctuation and seldom a break for breath or changing hands omg i can't get my eyes back right from trying toread this please go back to school and continue to fuck people cause you sound hot and oh try not to be a grammer nazi |
| 2006-07-17 18:23:45 |
the day i was with my best friend ashley
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poor language structure, and too much poor sentence flow. use some paragraphs and learn how to spell. gave the overall a 3 |
| 2006-07-17 18:24:13 |
the day i was with my best friend ashley
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next time use word. and i agree with everyone else, PLEASE GO TO SCHOOL AND LEARN ENGLISH AND GRAMMAR |
| 2006-07-17 22:06:33 |
the day i was with my best friend ashley
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hey, how did ur parents let u use the computer, GO 2 SCHOOL, they've sth called English lessons there that can help u. |
| 2006-07-17 22:21:32 |
the day i was with my best friend ashley
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a3 is to high i could notread the whole thing learn to spell an space willie t |