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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-09 23:04:49 | the day i was with my best friend ashley | Please find out about run-on sentences and using a spell-checker AND get someone to edit your stories. |
| 2007-02-01 07:42:22 | the day i was with my best friend ashley | it reads like you should have stayed in school and learned to write and read dumbass |
| 2007-12-09 17:26:01 | the day i was with my best friend ashley | I HATE STORIES LIKE THIS its all one big blocky paragraph although i got good eyes this will sore ur eyes after a while and its hard to read i didnt read antyhign apst the 1st line but 1/10 |
| 2008-01-27 08:39:40 | the day i was with my best friend ashley | sweet, but with grammar maybe you should've stayed in school. |
| 2008-03-09 21:46:49 | the day i was with my best friend ashley | ah kinna rite, will yu lall me naty names. you pedantic you!! |