| 2008-02-10 13:25:04 |
Me and Jeremy
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This was a great story, I connected with it because my friends name is jeremy and I like him :) |
| 2006-07-22 22:03:16 |
Wars Can Be Dangerious
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I have never before read such bad and misspelled shit. |
| 2006-07-22 23:56:32 |
Wars Can Be Dangerious
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I have, but only on IRC from people who didn't speak english. |
| 2006-07-27 16:45:08 |
Wars Can Be Dangerious
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where in the fuck did you go to school? It couldn't have been in an English-speaking country. This story was soooooooo fucked up, it was an aberration of the first order. Stop writing immediately and get a real job, such as working on the back of a trash truck. |
| 2007-04-03 21:39:14 |
Wars Can Be Dangerious
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what the... why all the random capitalizations? the spelling is randomly good, and randomly bad. there isn't any evident rhyme or reason to the way this story sucks ass, but i'm positive there is an underlying pattern. you spell words correctly that are more difficult than the onces you butcher. you seem to occasionally get into a good flow, but then... you talk about how he fucked her mouth and put his squirting mouth deep in her mouth. how much sense does that make? |