| 2006-07-24 01:41:39 |
My aunts dream
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not too shabby for the first try.spelling & paragraphs sure would make it easier to read. can't wait for part two! |
| 2006-07-25 04:48:03 |
My aunts dream
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Dear MMM: get someone to proof-read your story before sending it to xnxx. It could have been a red-hot, sex-filled tale, but the wacky spelling and long, long paragraphs took the wind right out of your story's sails. 5/10 at best |
| 2006-07-23 07:33:00 |
Wendy's Gangrape
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great story more pleaseeeee. 10/10 |
| 2006-07-23 10:51:21 |
Wendy's Gangrape
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Can you add some anal please? and a bit of double fucking would be nice. |
| 2006-07-23 17:37:51 |
Wendy's Gangrape
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the story will be nice if there was only oneguy who raped her and the girl resist in the beging and then she liked very much and start making sex voice....like oh oh oh i love it donot pull it please ..and so on thank you very much. |