| 2006-07-27 21:52:15 |
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Great story,I also agree that the sex wasnt the longest,But im pretty sure thatll be alot of first times for people :). |
| 2006-07-29 13:11:34 |
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ending sucked, but a for effort |
| 2006-07-31 09:02:53 |
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Thanks for all the comments. I really do apppreciate them. I guess when rereading it the sex part isn't that huge or in great detail, I should just stick to my other types of writing *wink*. Much love to all of you! |
| 2006-07-31 14:50:41 |
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good story, Caitlin. and even though the sex wasn't that long in it, most virgins don't last long anyway so it's not like you could've written 2 hours of straight crazy fucking. |
| 2006-08-02 22:53:01 |
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I think it's a good story. Fun to lose your cherry, wasn't it? Yeah, please keep writing . Tex |