| 2006-08-06 20:25:41 |
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it's a very good story but detials of sex weren't enouugh |
| 2006-08-07 14:43:41 |
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The name reminds me of Allie and me. did you copy it asshat? |
| 2006-08-07 16:12:43 |
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I have to say it was good. I've seen many a plot like this one unfold during my life time. The story and sex were well composed but the ending need to be longer. A few spelling errors but all in all very good. |
| 2006-08-08 09:49:30 |
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Good story but not enough details on the sex part! |
| 2006-08-17 12:33:40 |
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it was really good keep it up. i give it a 10 |