| 2006-07-29 18:11:44 |
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ptlk: it was written on a cell phone, right? guess it was either this or get another crappy ringtone. |
| 2006-07-31 14:12:10 |
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I would suggest using you instead of u, are instead of r, and so on and so forth. |
| 2006-07-31 14:37:38 |
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i could'nt finsh the story rewrite with and resubmit it might get a better rating. |
| 2006-08-01 19:16:21 |
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lun per char |
| 2006-08-13 13:20:13 |
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I don't know if the story is ant good because I stopped reading after the first few paragraphs. Your writing style sucks. Hard to read. Difficult to decipher. a 3.8 average rating is about 5.8 too high |