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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-09-21 20:24:55 | Monsters, Inc. | A superb story. don't pay attention to the suggestions for embellishing it. it's great just the way it is. my only criticism is to a minor grammatical faux pas: ...the three appendages (and) slowly slip... excellent job. you have true talent and skill. keep going. |
2007-10-03 22:34:26 | Monsters, Inc. | wat up? from my psp! |
2007-10-16 16:57:23 | Monsters, Inc. | i liked it. please continue this story |
2007-10-24 04:59:22 | Monsters, Inc. | Reader thee below. It's a story, not a lesson in grammar. >_> Very good story, 10/10. |
2007-11-12 22:20:32 | Monsters, Inc. | psp's rock no viuses .............. oh and good story |