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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-19 23:08:55 | the threesome_(4) | The grammar, synthesis of sentences was splendously horrendous. you wrote "i dozed off and then was awakend by the two girls carrying gifts." which should have been, "i dozed off, but was later awakened by the sound of those two girls carrying gifts.". such poor sentence construction and spelling, you ought to be ashamed of yourself. |
| 2006-07-27 14:48:14 | His x | hot and romantic. gf loved it. more? |
| 2006-07-28 00:05:18 | His x | very sensouse, I almost suspect drawn from experiance, My young slut read it to me, Her Master , as i allowed her to enjoy the pleasure. Hope to see more from you in the near future |
| 2006-07-29 20:15:42 | His x | Thankyou both for your kind words and encouragement =). I'll post anything i write from now on ;-). Alas, this was not drawn from experience - more like a day-dream that I took the trouble to document! I will endeavour to 'document' them more often ;-) Thanks again, Cx |
| 2006-10-03 04:04:44 | His x | I enjoyed your story very much. Very well written. |