| 2006-07-29 22:39:17 |
Something Like Love
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well if you learn to use proper english and correct spelling you might be an okey writter |
| 2006-07-30 19:51:57 |
Something Like Love
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Keep writing, you need the practice. |
| 2006-07-31 00:11:17 |
Something Like Love
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it was good but a little fast and needs a bit more discription in the sex bits |
| 2006-07-31 12:25:44 |
Something Like Love
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that sounded like a chat from an aim conversation, you suck at writing, please stop. |
| 2006-08-01 02:13:41 |
Something Like Love
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DON'T WASTE OUR TIME - LEARN ENGLISH BEFORE YOU BASTARDIZE OUR LANGUAGE AGAIN, YOU IGNORANT LITTLE TWIT |