| 2006-08-01 05:15:39 |
Something Like Love
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For a first try its not bad.. Keep trying my girl. Ignore the negative comments and just improve on the next one |
| 2006-08-01 05:28:30 |
Something Like Love
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Well Its good but u need to have more practice |
| 2006-08-01 09:16:28 |
Something Like Love
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I got three paragraphs in and had enough. If you are lil bit of a writer, you should know a lil bit about spelling. A story is not IM. Write complete words and complete sentences. |
| 2006-11-19 16:56:08 |
Something Like Love
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pretty lame. bad spelling and way to much garbage talk. just get to the fucking. |
| 2006-11-24 10:32:21 |
Something Like Love
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you suck |