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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-07-31 06:40:39 | Forbidden Fruit: Pt I | Sexy story. good in many ways ,but needs some work. You're doing well. |
2006-07-31 16:36:12 | Forbidden Fruit: Pt I | Good, sexy story. Gets a ten from this grampa |
2006-07-31 19:17:53 | Forbidden Fruit: Pt I | ***Twstd&Dmntd4Lfe*** bck @ you peeps............. 1.)real... good story..deffinently needs at least [part2] get""trina""in it too....2.)14yrold girl.. messin wiff her granddad{what the fuck ever}.... 3.)male/female""... = more than one woman = what the fuck happened there....4.)you failed to mention that there is{incest}....5.)you failed to mention that there is{domination}involved |
2006-07-31 21:18:25 | Forbidden Fruit: Pt I | to those people ther who don't like a very good an sexy story as this go some wher eles i loved the story keep writing more willie t |
2006-08-01 21:57:20 | Forbidden Fruit: Pt I | There aren't enough stories involving older men on this site, if you ask me. Thanks for helping to fill the void...as it were. And you do a great job with dialogue, another rare talent. Keep writing! |