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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-08-03 00:39:09 | Neighborhood Friends | Good, built it up rather well, cliff hanger was a good idea -- you just need some more detail. 8/10 |
2006-08-13 15:59:42 | Neighborhood Friends | if you "knew for a fact" she had never done anything like this, how does she let you give her anal her first time? just doesn't seem realisitic. |
2006-08-14 17:57:35 | Neighborhood Friends | that wuz iight 8/10 but i agreewith sqeek, more detail |
2006-08-15 08:46:23 | Neighborhood Friends | it was really good...but the sex seemed kinda rushed! need to expand a little when it comes to detail..but and awesome story:) looking foward to part 2 |
2006-08-15 16:18:19 | Neighborhood Friends | good story |