| 2006-08-16 03:26:16 |
Neighborhood Friends
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Good stuff, but avoid contradictions, awesome concept though...:) |
| 2006-08-22 17:40:10 |
Neighborhood Friends
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Good story..yes add more detail and don't rush it...yes the anal first time along with the pro blowjob seems a little far fetched.....but keep up the good work and lets see parts 2&3 along with your sexual imagination... |
| 2006-09-05 19:28:11 |
Neighborhood Friends
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stretch out the sex scene, more details, but good story anyway :) |
| 2006-09-10 01:11:23 |
Neighborhood Friends
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cute i did the same thing with my friend next door but i carry a rubber in my wallit so ya |
| 2006-09-20 21:37:22 |
Neighborhood Friends
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cute, not good |