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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-19 15:38:33 | Jenna Joins In | SOUNDS LIKE FUN NEVER DID IT BUT SUCKING ON A COCK I MIGHT LIKE TO TRY GIRLS LOVE IT YOU NEVER KNOW |
| 2008-01-21 20:38:07 | Jenna Joins In | good story, wishing i wash there |
| 2006-08-10 05:35:08 | Fun Being A 17 Year-Old | I didn't think it was that great. Nothing in particular wrong with it. It needs more description, and the action needs to slow down, not just being a list of every girl the guy has been with and what he did to her. |
| 2006-08-13 21:17:44 | Fun Being A 17 Year-Old | Agreed, I'll do more with this when I have time. Thanks |
| 2006-08-16 19:51:19 | Fun Being A 17 Year-Old | You kinda repeated yourself at the end there...did you need the extra characters to post the story? Believe me, if you need the extra characters, the story just isn't good enough. I thought this one was okay, but nothing really stood out about it. It was like watching a porn on fast forward...too much action, not enough time. Think out your story before you write it next time. |