| 2006-08-04 19:32:38 |
me and my best friend molly
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think so 2, basically good story, but my foreign ass lil sister knows better english. and please, paragraph dude... |
| 2006-08-04 19:41:02 |
me and my best friend molly
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The enter key makes new paragraphs :P AND take phonics it'll help you spell words like muscle and which. Because witch and which are two different words. Grow an IQ level, re-take high school English and then try to write again. |
| 2006-08-05 11:25:53 |
me and my best friend molly
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great story-needs spell check though&complete words |
| 2006-08-05 12:25:53 |
me and my best friend molly
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story was ok, but you must have failed school, please if you can't write better, send them somewhere else. very hard to read. |
| 2006-08-05 19:51:35 |
me and my best friend molly
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"lern 2 spel" |