2007-12-26 00:00:57 |
A Teenager's Revenge Part 9
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I REALY LIKE THAT IT WAS GOOD IT WAS REAL GOOD |
2008-02-01 08:31:59 |
A Teenager's Revenge Part 9
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yeah, another chapter would be nice..! =] |
2008-03-28 05:08:14 |
A Teenager's Revenge Part 9
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I really enjoyed the entire series. I would imagine that Kelly and her mom might move to a new city. One with new adventures. Use your vivid imagination. Maybe Kelly will get back at some high school boys who forced a girl in the locker room. Maybe a teacher or a coach who abused his or even her authority. At any rate.... you a very good writer and I look forward to reading more stories. |
2008-04-06 22:59:48 |
A Teenager's Revenge Part 9
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I agree, well written.... but the moms shoulda got no $ at alll then be humiliated in sum way... but supreme writing none the less |
2006-08-07 08:35:07 |
Harry potters secret.
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This story was quite arousing though it was lacking in only two areas which were your spelling and your gramar write it out in microsoft word first then copy and paste. |