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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-08 05:29:19 | Harry potters secret. | The Story What Thier Second Year? Hermione Didn't Have Any breast Then if You Watch The Movie, And They Are Only 12. Before Writing A Story That Is Based off A Popular Movie Make Sure To Make Is Matching With The Movie. I Undertand It Is Fiction And All But Still. And Hogwarts Desscode Is Robes Not Tight Jeans. And They Didn't Cuss Then Any. And You Can't Cout 'Bloddy Hell' As Cussing. |
| 2006-08-10 13:16:20 | Harry potters secret. | I suggest you leave the Harry Potter stories to the professionals. |
| 2006-08-11 02:28:16 | Harry potters secret. | mor wit some magic and shit |
| 2006-08-13 07:48:52 | Harry potters secret. | Wow man that was like shit, buddy learn to write there was no plot at all. And during the whole thing it gave no description of where they were or what was happenning... 3/10 |
| 2006-09-17 08:33:24 | Harry potters secret. | plz make the second one soon |