| 2006-08-07 13:33:22 |
Julia's barrackroom bang (Part 1)
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She needs to go back in and get with the soldiers. I want all the details, write more please. |
| 2006-08-07 15:05:35 |
Julia's barrackroom bang (Part 1)
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Great beginning...... |
| 2006-08-08 04:52:11 |
Julia's barrackroom bang (Part 1)
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Ok story but I didn't care for the rapid fire tone of it. made it seem that she was 'sick' and compeled to do it. but do write more , i think you will turn out ok. |
| 2006-08-11 02:08:08 |
Julia's barrackroom bang (Part 1)
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Hip Hip Hurrah ! |
| 2006-08-15 21:51:38 |
Julia's barrackroom bang (Part 1)
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Yeah! Good start. More, please. Tex |