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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-08 05:42:46 | Bri gets caught | Ever heard of paragraphs and a spellchecker? Make an effort!!! |
| 2006-08-08 19:47:35 | Bri gets caught | I would like to hear more and see where all you take this good job! |
| 2006-10-01 13:20:11 | Bri gets caught | why does everybody always tell you to include incest? whatever oh and I would love to see "Reader" write a good story because he obviously hasn't written anything yet. Not bad for a first, a little short, not enough detail, next time include paragraphs like the other guy said and make it longer oh and that guy in your story is a piece of shit |
| 2006-10-10 18:24:10 | Bri gets caught | it made me wet please write a part two |
| 2006-08-07 11:51:07 | Forbidden Fruit: Pt III | very respectable work so far foxxx. all three stories pretty much rock. I have to admit i liked your Teachers Fantasy series more, but that is only my opinion, don't take that harshly plz. Maybe it's the grand dad thing, dunno for sure, both are written well. -blade- |