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2006-08-14 03:49:00 End of the world - Chapter 8 bloody brilliant, keep up the greatness
2006-08-14 06:08:42 End of the world - Chapter 8 Bloody brilliant mate easily the best story ever full stop. keep on writing dude.
2006-08-14 09:19:09 End of the world - Chapter 8 ..... MOTHER FUCKIN BASTARD! i saw it coming, damn it..... sadly this is what happens with stories, the hero needs a nemesis, john was the first one, then frank, if the last nemesis dies, the hero has no one to match wits with, he becomes just another guy, and the hero can't be just another guy, and since there was no other person on the planet and the only bad kid he ever had just got shot in the head, he had no other nemesis, since he'd already managed to win over nature itself, which makes his role as hero moot..... sadly this is the bane of authors, they come up with an excellent hero, and throw him into impossible situations, with harder and harder enemies, and eventually they find he has no more enemies, what does he do then? the excitment of the story dies with the last nemesis, and while this is a sex story, part of why it is so intense and impossible to stop reading, is because of the danger..... imagine super man without a super villain to combat, no lex luthor, and no disasters to avert or people to save, is he still a hero at that point, or just another guy? and the authors just can't let their creations fall by the way side
2006-08-14 17:46:46 End of the world - Chapter 8 simply awesome 10/10
2006-08-14 18:26:24 End of the world - Chapter 8 so wait.... who was the son at the end?
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