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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-11 09:43:21 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Excellent story I loved all 8 chapters youve got a real talent for writing dont let it go to waste i look forward to reading some more of your stories. 10/10 |
| 2006-08-11 12:05:43 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | NIce ending to a great series, 9/10 for this one felt yoru sec scenes seamed a lil dry and rusehd though but i still love the way you added a great storyline and made feeling for the characters, did you have some sort of geneology to keep track of all kids or were you just able to remember each time you paired up. anyways great work look forward to something new if you decide to work on a new storry. great job and best of luck with furture writing |
| 2006-08-11 13:43:10 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Not long enough |
| 2006-08-11 17:03:03 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Have you ever thought about writing an erotic novel? I think that you have great potential to write a book that is like this series, only longer, with a longer story (and of course don't forget the sex)! Excellent job |
| 2006-08-11 17:59:12 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | very good story. loved the ending. thought it was going to dry up after shellys husband was killed. but you pulled it back into a new storyline nicely done overall 9/10 |