| 2004-10-20 12:38:40 |
A Job Well Done
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Like was said..go back to school because you're not much at good descriptions! |
| 2004-10-30 22:52:16 |
A Job Well Done
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CRITIC, FOR THE 2ECOND ATEMP THIS IS NOT BAD, HAVE YOU TRYED TO WRIGHT A STORY IF NOT YOU ARE NOT QUALIFIED TO MAKE SUTCH COMMENTS, YOU ARE ALL RONG IN YOUR COMENTS. |
| 2004-11-08 05:45:13 |
A Job Well Done
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THAT STORY WAS LAME AS HELL. LEARN HOW TO WRITE ASSHOLE |
| 2005-06-04 22:22:14 |
A Job Well Done
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U cant write for shit!!!!! I mean damn man read a few good stories and learn to fucking write!!!! For fucks sake dude do us all a favor and stop while ur a head u dont even deserve a fucking 1!!! 0/10 |
| 2005-06-23 18:30:10 |
A Job Well Done
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everybody is right. you need to learn how to write properly. the story sounds like shit when you can hardly understand what your reading. |