| 2005-11-13 01:37:14 |
A Job Well Done
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cum burper. some1 needs to bust a nut in your ear for writing this shit |
| 2005-12-12 03:29:24 |
A Job Well Done
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bullshit man pure bullshit!! |
| 2007-04-26 10:23:00 |
A Job Well Done
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Hey. Okay so you don't like his story and don't think he can write. By why are all of you so damn nasty about it. How does that make you feel good to treat someone who tries. I am a published writer (in a small way) and I want to offer encouragement. Besids friends of mine who work as editors tell me you'd be amazed how much work has to be done before many authors' work can go to print. Give the lad a chance and what on earth is wrong with being kind???!!! |
| 2007-08-31 01:31:00 |
A Job Well Done
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I don't see anyone in here writing anything you're all just being assholes criticizing someone who made a damn effort. why don't you get your own hands off your dicks and submit something and then we can judge your writing efforts. |
| 2004-03-14 09:56:16 |
Boss's daughter is nuts!
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Nice story vary well writen. I enjoyed reading it. |