| 2006-08-10 20:47:16 |
Wickedly Wild Wife
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The action was believable, and hot to my baked brain, but punctuation plays a large part of a good story, so keep practicing. u gotta 7 |
| 2006-08-10 21:06:16 |
Wickedly Wild Wife
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Hey thats fine. I dont claim to be a good writer, I just gave it a try. At least some people seem to like it judging from rating. |
| 2006-08-11 08:17:52 |
Wickedly Wild Wife
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Very good story Hope my wife don't do that as i look at porn |
| 2006-08-11 18:52:01 |
Wickedly Wild Wife
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I thought this was a very average story and not very realistic. For some reason the "authors" on these sites believe every woman wants a huge cock in her asshole. not so. This ass-fucking isn't nearly as widely practiced as these stories want us to believe. |
| 2006-08-16 21:22:31 |
Wickedly Wild Wife
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Not a bad story overall. I agree that the anal went too far in THIS story and easily became unbelievable. However, I would like to continue believing that ALL women want big cocks in their asses thank you:) Use this one as a stepping stone to another cheating story because I think you did a good job of getting people's attention for such a "lousy writer." |